Extracting key ideas from my essay
Synopsis of the topic
10 Key terms:
Whats it is and how is it used in the film industry. Why do we use it and how do we create it for films. How important it is and what limits does it have.
How is it effecting the job market is there a demand for more artists to help produce films.
How much the films are making in terms of money and what impact it is having on the world.
How it has developed over the 20 years.
Bad points that people make about visual effects with what they think of it as a whole.
Good points on why it is changing the entertainment industry and what else it is used for.
Statistics of how visual effects films on where they are compared to other films.
How is animation used in visual effects how has this developed over the years in the visual effect industry.
Facts about the arguments with statistics to back up the key points.
How it is growing and what other parts are also growing in the industry.
Structure of essay- Edit the structure of the essay more making sure everything is together and it builds up to the next part.
Harvard referencing- Correctly use the Harvard reference system for the essay so that the information I have found is referenced from the places I have found the information from.
Editing sentences- Fix up sentences that might not make sense or that can be altered to sound better then what they already are.
Adding book information- Using the books I have found to add more information and then shrinking them down to be applied to the essay.
Delete repetition- Make sure that I don’t repeat myself so that I can add even more information to the essay making the essay stronger.
Back up argument more- Give more evidence with my work to back up points and arguments.
Essay so far:
Things to add:
Add information about revenue and statistics. Explain more about the money that the industry is grossing and how big visual effects is in modern day films.
Add information how people feel about how its ruining films.
Good impact on how its developing films.
How people notice the bad but don’t notice the good effects.